GCSE Photography Assessment Sheet
STUDENT: Gena Hughes DATE: 06/01/14
TEACHER(S): coursework UNIT: coursework
TITLE: Summer Task
Target grade A
Wag B
Comments & Targets
The pictures that you have taken in this task show a real sense of discovery. The abandoned house shots are
particularly interesting the subject matter is particularly intriguing. The dull derelict images of the house placed
alongside the rich vivid tones of the Cornish flowers create a real juxtaposition of colour and theme. Draw the
viewer in however I would have liked to of seen a few more close up images demonstrating a willingness to
develop and refine your ideas.
The strength of your visual images is let down by the total lack of contextual study that would have formed the
second part of the Holiday tasks where is this work?
FORCE
Strand 1 - Force of nature – (T)
Some interesting images You have thought through the images well and demonstrated a good understanding of the brief.
However I would like you to use contact sheets and then edits rather than showing all your images in one go.
Strand 2 - Applied Force – (T)
.A good selections of images but again I would like to see contact sheets followed by choosen enlargements that are backed up with notes and links to other Artits.
Strand 3 - Force of transformation – (T)
This section is interesting I particulary like the burnt portraits these have the potential to be developed further.
GENNERAL COMMENTS
Well done Gena some excellent work here I think that you should continue to be experimental in your process and try out
Continue to develop your ideas and look at the following ways of development
Continue to develop the idea of the figure in the water.
Experiment with milk in the water
Create images in the style of Alexa Sheila this has to be done to complete the project it is key that you get a model to do this work.
Movement
More refinement is needed befor you get to your final prints. You could use the speaker in class and try and recreate the
work of Martin Klinass using paint and sound. Print out final pieces the larger they are printed the greater the impact that
they will have
Landscape
Work needs to be placed on one tab so it can be read easily. Please complete project and select final outcomes
Close up abstraction
Print out final pieces the larger they are printed the greater the impact that they will have
Well done some excellent work continue to develop your ideas and look at the following ways of development
Continue to develop the idea of the figure in the water.
Experiment with milk in the water
Create images in the style of Alexa Sheila
STUDENT: Gena Hughes DATE: 06/01/14
TEACHER(S): coursework UNIT: coursework
TITLE: Summer Task
Target grade A
Wag B
Comments & Targets
The pictures that you have taken in this task show a real sense of discovery. The abandoned house shots are
particularly interesting the subject matter is particularly intriguing. The dull derelict images of the house placed
alongside the rich vivid tones of the Cornish flowers create a real juxtaposition of colour and theme. Draw the
viewer in however I would have liked to of seen a few more close up images demonstrating a willingness to
develop and refine your ideas.
The strength of your visual images is let down by the total lack of contextual study that would have formed the
second part of the Holiday tasks where is this work?
FORCE
Strand 1 - Force of nature – (T)
Some interesting images You have thought through the images well and demonstrated a good understanding of the brief.
However I would like you to use contact sheets and then edits rather than showing all your images in one go.
Strand 2 - Applied Force – (T)
.A good selections of images but again I would like to see contact sheets followed by choosen enlargements that are backed up with notes and links to other Artits.
Strand 3 - Force of transformation – (T)
This section is interesting I particulary like the burnt portraits these have the potential to be developed further.
GENNERAL COMMENTS
Well done Gena some excellent work here I think that you should continue to be experimental in your process and try out
Continue to develop your ideas and look at the following ways of development
Continue to develop the idea of the figure in the water.
Experiment with milk in the water
Create images in the style of Alexa Sheila this has to be done to complete the project it is key that you get a model to do this work.
Movement
More refinement is needed befor you get to your final prints. You could use the speaker in class and try and recreate the
work of Martin Klinass using paint and sound. Print out final pieces the larger they are printed the greater the impact that
they will have
Landscape
Work needs to be placed on one tab so it can be read easily. Please complete project and select final outcomes
Close up abstraction
Print out final pieces the larger they are printed the greater the impact that they will have
Well done some excellent work continue to develop your ideas and look at the following ways of development
Continue to develop the idea of the figure in the water.
Experiment with milk in the water
Create images in the style of Alexa Sheila